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Old 10-08-05, 02:30 PM   #16
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Originally Posted by Apexx
beat's okay. Not nuts about the synths, but it has a nice build-up. The beat needs a more pronounced melody.

the quality is shakey. got mad sizzle on it, but the lyrics on it were hot IMO and the flow was better than average, but but more lumpy than "great". Pretty much "really good". If the flow on the hook was on and you doubled it, it'd actually be pretty hot man. Shoulda cut that extra syl of "the" when saiyng "I bring the melody". I'd have changed it to "I bring melodies..."

Beat works well with it man. All in all it's a pretty good track that needs a little polish to be a "Great" track. 1


Thanks man...appreciate it...I will work on that shit.
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