Voted For: flow verse

Fools keep stating their “big” but please do tell
Y it only took “4 bars” to put this fuck in a “cell”
3...relating prison bars to rap bars is played
Kid thinks he’s the sickest rapper better than me? Na here’s the truth
By accepting this battle you got screwed over. Like fucking on a roof
4...decent
He thinks his lines are “funny” but here’s the fact
If “ass” got a “PhD” he still wouldn’t be a “wise-crack”
3....weak
Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut
This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up
0....not much of a punch..

My lyrics sour to your ears like a lime
Masta Killah rapping don't even need to rhyme
2....whack....first line self glorified.
I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew
I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo
1...not a punch...just a threat.
My punchlines type hard like throwing a horseshoe
My shit unrehearsed so you could call it impromptu
1...self glorifing
I bet..i'll make this guy 4-9 in just 1 hush
Hitting you and your town like a bum rush
2....borderline self glorifing
And flow verse whats going on through your mind?
Too late, you're falling too far behind
2..whack..wtf?

Ok...One-sided battle...for real.
Notorious...
Stop self glorifing.You have too much.Make every bar have a punch.Like the voodoo line/unrehearsed/bumrush....those lines self glorified as opposed to dissing the other guy.
Also..don't separate ur bars like that..put it all together.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209370
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