Thread: Alley Tales
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Old 10-08-05, 08:57 PM   #4
taelor
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aye i liked tha title i give it a 7/10
u gotta work on ya structure
but tha tightest line waz.............. plastic action figures stick up out of the trash in heaps
right next to a casketless body, its a nasty maggot feast.............................
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