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Old 10-08-05, 09:36 PM   #2
Conceptions
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Voted For: Natural killa

Aii This Is What I Think

Leady
this is a powercut, understand ya never gonna rip it kid
u gettin ur lights knocked out, like the city that you livin in*
...Kinda Tacky and It Aint all that strong hittin....
look at ur record, thats 25 newbies and 5 allmost average kids
proof this kid will never bring heat, like a lighterless arsonist
Lighterless is not a word lol ...Nice line though
u not runnin the game, listen as these sick flows beatin ya
why u actin gangsta? u not real player like windows media
.....Aii...Couldve been worded way better..
i know this next concepts played, but im just spitting facts
that im sonnin this cunt....... so just call me k-trini's dad(trinidad)**
...Ok You Admitted yourself ..*Played*..So why did you use it
you will allways be a nobody, im leavin u blatantly dealt
making a new account is the only time he makin a name for himself
...Weak concept alright punch..
fuck this battle, we all know that you aint writing
so im ending your time on RV like when u was banned for biting***
...Weak...a Little to Literal for me ...

Overall Your verse was average i couldve been worded way better if you ask me and i think that you used concepts that you knew were played and yet you stuck it in your verse instead of rewording it and makin it a little more original you left it as it was which was so wack ,,....jus my thought...but i dont think that you deserve my vote srry ....

NK
u ain't no "Spiderman" on this web..ya verses get us droozy
cause damn....you packing less "venom" than the 1st 2 movies
...Aii...
get immersed with uzi's..body torn 'n face shifted wit embriodery
'n ya country's like JIVE to me...cos it's all missing a "prodigy"
....Better....
u loving "danny daubney",defendin him for 7 pages?,FUCKIN DAMN!
cos that just shows...that you'd go to great lengths just to fuk a man*
....LOL .....Not strong punch but a def strong personal..
before,u duck 'n ran..'n now ya battle?shit,prewrittens can get bended,son
cos I'ma have you "meating" a loss,odds of you winnin's "tender" none
...?...A Lil packed with words man...knocked off the punch..
sending a gun...straight to ya face..u got nutin to say tonight
herbs beat ya "neon" the floor...but you still ain't "display'n light"
....Aii....
obey or striked...this shit's a mismatch...ur style's too hollow for a fight
only reason ya "Lead-E" is cos u already do all the followin in real life
....BEtter...actually good...

Overall You did better than Leady bcuz you were more original and better worded than leady's and you basically supplied some good personals that were very good n backing up your line so i had to give my vote to you i think that you win thia battle

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