yea im liking the drums too
alien sound thingy = nono
id jus tone it down a bit, dont take the whole thing out...cause it aint that bad
that hook is hot as well
good use of the strings

piano/keyboard ish aint bad
it sound pretty westcoast, but id throw a gunshot or something in every now and then instead of the alien sound...cause intermentals right, most westcoast beats are gangsta

but weerd yo nice work

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