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Voted For: Atticus
damn, hot battle here...a pretty decent read.
Atticus wass good famz?
this was really nice, loved your vocab not over done...
flow was off a bit though.. but ur imagery was there like whoa i got great imagery from this proops this line was good imagery jus work on your flow kid
"and Foam binds itself about his lips from his labors...
As he Spits... and forever Exiles his Mother under a Layer of Black Tar."
sick man
your shit was nice too
but imagery dont stack up at all compared to atty
your flow was about the same also
overall coo battle
atty jus kills the imagery here, which in my book is the most important aspect in a topical.
both work on flow, and yall str8
v/ atticus
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