pain is weakness leaving the body
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^very weak feed........... this was one of my first pieces, i'm lookin for real feed, to see how far i've elevated, i'll agree that was a weak rhyme (Biggie Smalls) from a rap standpoint..... but this has got to be the weakest feed anyone has ever left me........ i hope u didn't use this as a link.....
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance
my poetry:
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