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Old 10-10-05, 02:23 PM   #2
Indeph
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Voted For: Atticus

ok..

Well none of you rhymed so I'll exclude flow from the vote.

Atticus: The way you worded your shit was amasing
"He knows not of his victim's Relation, rather only progression."
And the metaphore with mother and mother nature. Your vocab didn't make my brain explode, but it was there. Structured well(don't care though), plus imagery painted clearly. Ill job.

Sick I am:

Basically you didn't do anything wrong. But your strong points were outmaatched by atticus. So its hard for me to vote You did good though, just you were outmatched.

Don't remove this vote I did my best

vote/atticus