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Old 10-10-05, 03:00 PM   #12
icy-hot
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Voted For: Drop Dead

Flow irritates like that bug you just can't get out your house
Drop Dead......................you took the words right out my mouth!!!!
weak

This nigga's flows ain't accepted, shit's rejected
Couldn't come across as ill if you rhymebook went septic
nice feeling that,

Faggot.......oops where my manners homosexuals have rights too
Nigga's hated, you flow so wack even your rhymes spite you
not a good ending,

all around you had only 1 good bar, 5/10


|..‘Rappin’ You In A Ball’, Dead’ll Enjoy Heavin’-Marks-Out-Tied,
Cuz My Punches “Pitch, Black” Without It ‘Bein’-Dark-Outside’..|
punch is stupid not directed to him and wit-less....

|..Like A Bat-Or-A-Vulture, I ‘Don’t Fly’ For Placs-Of-The-Culture,
So Punches Will “Chizzle Art, Form” Like ‘That-Of-A-Sculpture’..|
ok now thats a little better

|..His ‘Spits Never Above Mine’… Just Between You-And-The-Uzi,
So You’ll “See Black Hawk, Down” Without ‘Viewin’-The-Movie’..|

again to much word-play if fucking ya verse up but it was aight, you bearly get my vote take it easy on the word-play dont force it....

6/10