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IP:
it was ight duke u gotten a lil betta but keep writin & u'll reach ya potential but i'll give diz a 6/10 ....mainly cuz tha vocab was betta diz time den ur last piece, structure was good, imagery & topic u wrote about jus seemed off a lil ...but not bad
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