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Old 10-11-05, 02:01 AM   #10
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Voted For: Satans Spawn

vote for satans spawn>>>... you got my vote cuz your structure was pretty perfect and beacuse even though you didnt write much. it looked like u knew wat you were doing and it seems like your better than wat you just did.. also because of " fruity pucnhes than a violen...
.. yeah and your vocab was also pretty koo..but next time drop a harder verse and and also drop more lines.


Big Jay R. you need to fix your structure.. you need to know that you gotta keep control of it.. you also gotta drop harder punch lines.. but your vocab was better and played harder but it seemed like your just getting the hang of it.. but just elevate.. no hate. just elevate...

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