yo i aint feeling this song really


aight the consept was coo but ehh nothing really good

first verse....kinda weak for doomsday ive heard better nothing real nice lyrics arent dope your flow is lame, your voice is way too deep for this, sounds ugly
you got a basic rhyme scheme, you should have sumwhat introduced the song in your verse ya feel

second verse, a lil better the ryhme scheme wa alot better the lyrics where lame again kinda sounded liek you fucked up in 2 spots, like you fucked up, lol i dont knwo how else to put it, i would have to listen to it again to tell you....

singer wasnt at all amazing, real basic and if you guys are tryna go places right now you need to pick up a better singer becuase you dont got time for him but if you guys are taking one day at a time not worring about shit then he can be real nice
is he new to recording?

yea this song wasnt nothing real special would have liked to listen to it with a different rapper
the singer kinda took this song so Cream came out strong on this

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