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Old 10-11-05, 10:42 AM   #8
Vaskez
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We get hearing problems by ya style,its your voice we cant stand
Might aswell be Russel Simmons,From the way you make Def Jams
^^man saying his jams are deaf ain't really a punch, also jams doesn't rhyme well with stand

Ya punches aint hitting, yea im right even if ya tried o hit me wit a left
Cuz mine is like knives that killed J(u)lius -Cezar- so now ull be Seeing Death
^^this is a much better concept, poorly executed, don't just throw wordplay in like the left right stuff for the hell of it, make it work, make it funny/witty, make it have a point

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