wow...deep! lol obviously very good imagery and emotion, I liked how u used colour to represent feelings towards the end.
and these were my favourite lines.
two words... 'i do'... emotions flood her head
this ring... the key to my heart id place on her hand
i look to the sky as i a new moon is born over the land
dunno why, maybe im just a big romantic
lol but seriously i liked how the ring represented the key to ur heart, overall a really dope piece! nice drop!