emotion is dominant in this piece, it has a decent flow, altho i think u tried too hard to make it rhyme. i think with an emotive piece like this, the rhyming was actually unnecessary.

Taking Away Our Names And Givin Us The Choice Of Death Or Chains
Trying To Convince Us That We Are Not The Same
Even Down To The Intellegnce That Is In Our Brain
-That's Fuel for The Fire

^^^that was the best lines by far. I really liked the statement and it seemed as though u were angry,again emotion. keep elevating and keep droppin! 1

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I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!