good piece overall....A LOT of emotion in dis piece but didnt flow too well in my eyez maybe cause u tried too hard but oh well

But The Sickness That Is Now In Their Area Because Of Bad Water
And The Deaths Of Their Family Because Of No Supporter
Tryin To Really Help Them Out By The Words That I Speak
-Motivation Is The Fuel For The Fire

^^those were da best lines in my eyez
keep up da good work..1