i liked the topic - talking bout words / ink / pen
always a good read.. some of you lines were pretty good
while others were weak and boring. very unconsistant
with a little work tho this could be a very good poem
try using words that have a much deeper emotional meaning
when your writing dont use the first word that comes to your head
think about it and youll think of a better word or phrase to
express what your trying to say - keep writin man, ill check up on ya next drop

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