The beat you use is pretty good, nice slow n a nice melody. Your flow is pretty good, the fact that you really keep on story is good, emotion could be upped. But theres somin that makes me ahte the sound of your voice, its not your voice actually its somin you do to make it sound better which doesnt make it sound better to me. anyway the track is pretty good i can see your comin along well.

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