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Old 10-12-05, 12:47 AM   #54
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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Voted For: Natural killa

god damn lol opener ill as hell killed it good vocab flow structure more mets u could work on i guess personals were nice ur opener killed it luving it you got this easy
'n system ain't recongize ya name..cuz even it knows ya THAT WHACK*

furgud ok flow vocab basic no personals id liek to see u work on metaphores and personals your verse was jsut lacking i liked ur well i didnt liek any of ur lines easy
vote nk rtf bitch please

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or vote on all and ill hit up the same amount of battles
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