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Old 10-12-05, 05:03 AM   #351
Terumoto
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Just stop it kid. cos what your verse promises
you couldnt possibly deliver, you talk like you're on top of shit
and that type a talk is just a lotta shit.
You should spit from the heart... so ill stuff ya mic down ya asophygus
Your punches and bars are overused, like ya commas is
Try spitting modern shit, original lyrical masterpieces
kind of like mine. more pivotal than before and after jesus
Everytime I drop it causes mass change
evolution of had ways, but your shit just causes mass pain
It was a struggle to read the first line, let alone to reach the last phrase
You're a damn shame. a shame lyrically,
probably a shame physically, and worst of all,
you're a shame to the rap industry.
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