Coming to Kill you All
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Your lyric's are 'bad bitch'... you will never find a dime...
Couldnt flow a decent line even if Mike Jones wrote ya rhyme...
3.......woulda hit better if ya said someone else besides Mike Jones..cos mike jones ain't all that lyrically.
Should be a crime to pick up a pen, puttin' ya text to rest...
Your raps are fake, the only cheese you'll make is processed...
4....decent.
Smashin' fraud like glass... my lyrical test you cant pass...
Fraud your like a student skippin'a period you got no class...
3...played.
Fraud's raps are ass like cheeks... time to smash this geek...
Kid wears high heals when he raps to be at his highest peak...
4...decent punch,nice flow wit the internals
Slash this hoe, your rap flows are like a hose with a leak...
Aint runnin' smoothly, time to end this wannabe with a kink...
2...kink and leak don't rhyme...
Shut him off like a sink wash all of his shit down the drain...
Every line you write blows, like Fraud was blowin' cocaine...
3....drug lines are played as well...
Writing phoney shit... just quit it... man your a disgrace...
Threw a fan in his speaker just so he could have a fan base...
5....good
Your losin' this race, your lines are awed cuz there flawed...
Mods say your spits are fraud, because your really a broad...
2...seems like ur sayin shit just cos it rhymes...why would mods call him a fraud cos he's a broad???..makes no sense.
you want a battle you know how the story-go's
you'll get beat N put in a black N white suit like oero
1...no punch...just you threatning him.
Damn, First it was a amateur,……Now you’re just as ‘Weak Too’
RV must think your a hand job, the way the want me to ‘beat you
3...forced multi there...ok punch
In dungeons I keep you, Ya wack raps I quickly damage with these spits
I just wanna know how did you ‘Get Retarded’ b4 Canibus released it??
1...this was whack.
The verse of stealth,the purpose felt, gkillah dont hurt ya self
"never ill" cuz your as bout as "sick" as people with perfect health
0...the punch here was played to death..and a lot of pointless multis there that are saying nothing.
500 degree's bars makin you melt, this aint a spiritual bout
Couldnt even win in "structure" if you had an even syllable count
2....no,even sllyable counts don't ensure perfect structure
Like "hail" I drop hard, win with a "smile" cuz im a "southstar"
gkillah you couldn't "spit hot" if "lava" was a type of "mouthwash"
2...no...set-up was irrelevant and spit hot lines are played.
Your pathetic, I flow genetic, Gkillah it's "BOLD to see
"drunkies"wouldnt like ya"bars"even if you gave away for free
2...gave what away for free?...weak punch.
I refuse to staul, your loosing all, Gkillah hot? he's confussing yall
Cuz I flow like "fire extinghishers" how easily I "cool him off"
2...man,another played line...
ok...seemed to be a quick battle by both.
Fraud...
I see ur trying to incorparate multis in ya verse...but it's not working.Ur either forcing them or wreckin a good concept of a punch wit it.Try to stay away from multis for now and get used to using punches first.U also had too many played lines.All those "spit hot" and dick lines are played...
GKillaz..
Not the best shit in the world...but it was enuff..U also had played lines.You also seemed to force some internals.(ie..Your last bar)
V/Gkillaz.
*favor returned*
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