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Old 10-12-05, 03:40 PM   #18
Dickard.
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Voted For: Law_Jr

RADIKAL-ya, ur verse was iight...but mostly u contained self glor...your wordplay and concepts were good, but just to much self glor...try to incorporate....you had some attempts at punches...just didnt feel them...overall 3/10

ThatNigga-Your verse was pretty weak to be honest yo...u had the only str8 punches constintaly there.....up on getting ur structure normal and stop using whack wordplay...but u had the better punches

v/thanigga

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