Voted For: Apostrophe

You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar
The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater
3...i remember doing a hood line like this before...and that was in the cyphers...so,for a written line...this was bad.
Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused*
N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause
3....didn't like this..why?..becuz for the reader to catch it..we'd have to read the explanation.And explaining punches is considered atrocious nowadays.
You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident
You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance
4...bah...decent,i guess........tho i actually remember using an abstinance line in cypers as well..LoL.
Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto
Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito
4....bah....

I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp….
&& no one would have fun watching your words play even if..
…………………………..you were the scrabble champ…
4.....didn't like how u had the dots 'n shit.decent punch nevertheless.
I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool…
Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s…
3...nah...sounded cheesy.
From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason..
You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace..
……………………………………….last season..
5...Dope concept..but again...why the fuck you had the dots?..just weakened the punch by makin us pause for no reason.
Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it..
While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat…
…………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it…
5....good.

OK...compared to the majority of battles in Fl,this was good.
Apos....
Well...you had some good punches 'n shit..but u had dots in there that fuked it up a bit.Like..when we readin it..the dots make us pause and it's annoying.So stop that.Only line that sucked was the countin by 2's one..as that was just cheesy.The others were ite.

Mystic...
You had played lines.Hood/sweater,Abstinance...both played concepts that u used.And the metta's pause line..i didn't like it due to the fact that no one would be able to understand it if u didn't explain.

Also...how is it ur verse in our battle was sooooooo much better than ANY other shit u wrote?
it was a whole different style and everything....pre-writing doesn't allow u to conjour a verse beyond ur own level like that.
This just leads me to MORE suspicion that u bit it from somewhere...

Anyways...
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