Voted For: Defined

kids been defined as whack since da day of his birth
classified as the whackest to ever walk gods green earth
2...set-up and punch bassically said the same exact thing,for real.And it was weak.
i know this shit hurts,but can you deal with it
cause you aint da type that can just chill wit it
2...weak.
you get parinoid,like a crackhead ya cant stay sober
call me a demon cause to you its like the world is over
1...self glorifing
you look really cold like yo ass about to die
could spit a hot rhyme but dont want ya to fry
1....played out.
hyperthermia kick in,ya dead my work here is done
next time pack more heat before going against legend son
1...self glorifing

ill kick your mouth in to disable all your lectures
killa??...sure..eyes blind bumbs on the texcture
4....decent.
reflection alone believe worthlessness in mirror
defined legend worth a 1000? must be new era
3....bah..boring.
your verse shows noobs the worse way to suck
name yourself legend??...then why FL you duck
3....aah...ok...
believe in the Aftermath of your drop discretion?
wonder why 50s eyes you allow as a protection
4...ok.......
aight so you as good as 50..yall see what i see?
if shit was in a package......................................
....................he would be the one to out box me
6...yea..good bar.

Ok...one-sided battle

Legend..you need work.
U repeated urself,had too many self glorifing lines,and had too many played things.Any 'rhyme hot lines are played..so try to be more creative.Dont self glorifing in battles.It's oK in a set-up or sumtin,but not in a punch.A battle is to clown the oppenent.

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