Voted For: Natural killa

Theory

Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well
Naw wasnt feelin this...........
Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck
MEH.....ok
I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved
MEH
'm ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick
LMFAO.....NOOO

Overall.....5/10

vs

Natural

i ain't even takin this shit serious....i'ma just get up 'n tattle
cos c'mon,i ain't losin..this cat doesn't even kno how to set-up a battle
MEH....ok...coulda worded better
I'ma dent up his saddle 'n raddle..kill him 'n bury his heart in the clinic
& his flow's is like his name.....shit's just "TEARY" from start to finish
Aight....
ya cards diminished...this shit could be B-ball 'n u'd try to cough on the batter
I'll snap a finger in ya face... cos that's how quick ya fell off the ladder
Ha...aight
Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position
Aight....decent

Overall....7/10

v/natural for a better overall verse....theory work on better and more direct punches....also work on your wordplay as well as wording

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