Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos
Mystic Chaos- Your verse was pretty funny, you had some played concepts...but you re-worded them to become doper and comical...you had good incorporated wordplay that appealed to me...your personals...was a penis line...we all know thats played...but then you had some pretty strong lines to back that up
best line : Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused*
N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause
overall: 7/10
Apostrophe- Your verse was ok, hard to read due to the font, nonetheless you had some good punches there in ur verse....kinda some played scrabble line....backed it up with a couple good punches...had some good wordplay and personals...but lacked in the flow...hard to flow ur verse...so it didnt make the punches that appealing
best line: Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it..
While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat…
…………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it…
overall: 6/10
v/mystic chaos
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