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Old 10-14-05, 07:07 PM   #28
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Mystic Chaos
You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar
The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater
The First Line was kinda To Expected but the second line was a lil more original
Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused*
N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause
.......The Concpet was sick but you Spell The other word menoupause...
You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident
You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance
...Aii....
Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto
Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito
.LOL corny but Made me laugh at how corny it was..

Overall Man You came quit decent and you had some original lines and some nice concept so I had to give my vote to you in this battle ................nice work man keep it up ....

Apostrophe
I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp….
&& no one would have fun watching your words play even if..
…………………………..you were the scrabble champ…
/..........Nice....../
I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool…
Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s…
.........Weak Concept and a Def Played punch........
From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason..
You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace..
……………………………………….last season..
........Weak...........
Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it..
While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat…
…………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it…
..........Aii......

Overall man You couldve Used more of an Original verse I say That you Should try to make up some good and dope concept and turn them into dope punchez ...........but in this battle you failed to do so ....so i couldnt give you my vote

sorry

my v/ goes to Mystic
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