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Old 10-14-05, 11:13 PM   #36
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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Voted For: flow verse

notorius no personals put all of ur liknes together you need to work on the coabs in ur rhyme scheme didnt really feel any of ur lines to be honest elevate

better vocab and wordplay you didnt have any personals either so meh however i was felling ur fucking on the roof line and thats about it work on personals not a bad battle

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