Voted For: Defined

legend umm personals you could have done better structue was good rhyme scheme weak kindergarten shit work on ur vocab wordplay work on it didnt really like any of ur lines to be honest but hey everyone has good and bad days this was jsut a bad one keep sropping
defined not feeling ur personals either like the blind man line good vocab work on ur woordplay but not abd both werent that great
rtf or i will dq my vote
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