Voted For: Ryda

ok ur structure is a little better vocab ok but in parts the rhyme scheme is weak but better throw in multis its needed in text u had one good personal with the 0 line pretty good but u need more
big o wack kis nop flow because of ur structure vocba lacking personals where are they? elevate
rtf or i will remove my vote thank you
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