like your sig........ ok........ great metas and voc......... nice, original concept........ not sure what was goin on with the structure, but it wasn't bad....... wow....... this iz a really good piece........ chip iz my boy, he knows what he's talkin about........ i'd give u an overall 9/10..... keep writing...........

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