Thanx V.much for the feed..

lots of peeps dont get structure on RV so lemme explain. I Study poetry and the use of structure is V.important in a piece. Short, quick lines are absolute, they give a sense of making a statement,like 'Diction is my addiction' I've tried to use alliteration, enjambment, short and long lines to create the effect that i want. I duno if i've succeeded lol but i tried. For evry1 on RV that thinks structure of poetry or OM's shuld be all the lines the same length, that is wrong.

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!