Thread: Ryda vs Big_O
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Old 10-15-05, 09:17 AM   #10
Black Arts
This is my first post!
 
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Voted For: Ryda

this battle wasn't too good at all to be completely honest.
the punches were completely missing the target/non existant for real. but ryda got this one as his verse, even though there were obvious flaws, consistently attempted to rhyme, unlike big o who only started rhyming in the last 3 bars. let me break this down.

i assinate this MC like there is no tomorrow
this kids new name is gunna be john doe
^^no punch 0/10

cause afta this battle he'll be nonexistent
this kid rhymes are not consistent
^^flows weak structure is poor. statement as opposed to a punch 0/10

kids got nuthin wit his wack rhymes hes says he's big_O
But last time i heard his win colum was Zero
^^should have rhymed with "big_O" and not just "O" and the punch was weak 1/10

thats why ur record is consealed
i got this win like a rap deal that is sealed
^^rhymed the word "sealed" with itself and more self glorification than punch 0/10

he's gunna lose this battle like the rest of his
wit this battle caught him off suprize like a pop quiz
he aint ready for this afta i win this battle ill be in bliss
^^statement no punch.you shouldn't attempt three line bars just yet 0/10

Man this kid should just commit suicide
kids got no chance against me, battlin me it's a homicide
^^"suicide" and "homocide" don't rhyme and non existant punch 0/10

overall 1/60
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Ay yo ryda i know what you are........
Thats a bitch give it up man
you got no skill your a fucked up man
Every one goes and calls you a dick ryda*
But not me.....not today I know the truth
That you are gay theres no reason to point fingers
We in massachusetts man it legal**At least thats what they say You think you gonna win man? No way
^^^none of it rhymed and there were no punches 0

You got two wins so you think you good
you grew up in rockland man that aint the hood***
You go to rockland High thinkin you the shit
But there one little problem man you cant spit
SO i basically win your two basic......
Now man wake up its time to face it..........
^^^this was all garbage to be honest 0


you both really need to elevate to be honest, but ryda margnially took this one

peace