Not feeling the beat on this one...dunno what exactly that throws me off though...

Good concept you working with here, hook is nice add-on to the song in fact. You managed to keep your flow on point. Your delivery is there, you sound aggressive hehe. Using good internal rhyming which gives your flow sort of natural pace in fact. Got your lyrics down as usual, liking this track. May have added another verse even though your verse was sorta long. Maybe you should've done two and made the first one shorter you know. Just a minor thing though...nothing serious...

Keep at it cutie, you know you got more coming...

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