Don't Even Think About It
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IP:
Voted For: Apostrophe
Apostrophe:
I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp….
&& no one would have fun watching your words play even if..
…………………………..you were the scrabble champ…
Lol Ouch...Good personal and punch...Really nice
I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool…
Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s…
Lmfao good shit...
From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason..
You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace..
……………………………………….last season..
good shit
Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it..
While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat…
…………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it…
Fucking owned...
Overall: Your verse was sexy man. So dope, I had to touch myself. Nothing played, you had some hard-hitting punches, creative concepts, and dope personals. This verse will be hard to top.
Mystic:
You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar
The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater
Played as fuck.
Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused*
N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause
Hot concept, but worded horribly...Would've been dope though
You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident
You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance
Meh...Decent...But again, you need to work on wording
Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto
Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito
Lol this made me laugh...Pretty good
Overall: You had some played concepts, some wack lines, and some horrible wording in this verse man. Stay away from the played shit, and word your shit better man, because your verse DID have potential. You just didnt give him all you had, and he's not someone who will let you get by that easily.
V/ Apostrophe
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Originally Posted by Drakel
my feminine side is a lesbian
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