its a good song, the parts just dont really fit together
the beat is good, but doesnt really go with the idea of the track
u tried to establish a "message" type of song, but u didnt give a message at all. woulda been better if u'd tried to make a point or suttin n stick wit it. n i think a slower beat n flow wudve better suited the song 2, but u came fast on it... u have good delivery n flow, n the lyrics r good, but it just dont work for this song