Voted For: Shazz
Shazz... more like shit cause thats what i smell facing this bitch
0...played and basic concept worded horribly.
You want to battle cause i voted agianst you*
Just Like Christiana Aguilara Dirty** Try Shampoo
0....no...u got something here,but wording was the worst I ever seen
Your sick and Disgusting and got no flow
And people hate you where ever you go***
1...noooooooo...what the fuk is this shit?
Your dumb and retaded so give it up
Next time just dont show up...........
0...this isn't even a punch.
OK..I'm not gonna break down Shazz's verse as it's clear that he won.
Big_o...don't separate ur lines like that...it just makes it look newbish.And don't explain ur punches...that's just gay now.It's played out.Word ur punches so u don't have to explain it.ANd u need better concepts for punches.Seems like u kept talkin about christina.And that was boring.
Vote-Shazz
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