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Old 10-15-05, 04:51 PM   #9
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Voted For: Mr. Multie

This nigga's a pro? bet you haven't enter'd the zone vet-1
I'd tell'em to think outside the box..................................
....................................but he's not leave'n his home yet-2
This is easy see ima handle this dude wit ease-7
Gave'em a shot for the win..............................................
................................but he'll lose tryna shoot the breeze-8
Im dope you wack, its safe to say opposites really attract-9
Black we may have color in common..................................
.......but we're not twins so sorry i haven't met my match-10

VS

badly worded bars...and a few played concept.

you came weak her black.

multie your opener was dope but your structures fucked, fix the ......................................... and -1 shit...you have loadsa potential stay up both.

be sure to rtf.

no hate.
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