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Theory
Um i didnt get that, your rhymes were pretty basic, the rhyme scheme was horrible to me, your stucture was alright but you had nothin creative in there, barley any hard hittin personals and yet you had no creative wordplay to twist shit up, i suggest you learn more before you say all that garbage shit you said in your verse.
common
well I dont like how you bit the name, haha, and thats one thing he could used on you but ehh, your flow was good but i didnt really see much i seen some attempts but they werent so great, your punches need more define in them, explain better and twist them words even more, but for the fact that attempted better punches and what not you get my vote.
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