not feeln beat, u need emotion, u just talkn no enegery
flow needs alot of work
sounds robotic not natural
lyrics seem lame
chorus is a good idea, but doesnt sound right
up the beat volume
2nd person sounds like a chick lol
Quality is worse than 1st dude
flow also bad, lyrics nothing worth remebering
not a fun track to listen too
Just practice more i guess

3/10

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