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Old 10-16-05, 01:06 AM   #14
JRoy
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alright peepin it up now...

that beats decent.....
speats you did decent...ya flow was not as it usually is....like it dont fit this kinda beat...but its straight.....ya lyrics are ehh..not really there but there decent....the hook is good but it needs a little more work its not too shabby at that part.....2nd person ya flow is decent....ya lyrics are ehh soo soo....ya flows what keeps u alive....but yeah this tracks overrall decent....6/10

rtf - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211670
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