What can I say...

This was captivating from start to end with real nice meaning that really hit home. The flow was felt from beggining to end with some great use of wordplay. The thing you did best was make it so that when the people spoke they weren't rhyming. I find a piece loses it's realisticness..?... once a person starts rhyming when speaking. This was real nice though, I enjoyed it.

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