Long read. It wasnt an amazing, perfect piece. It was good though. You really forced your vocab and I didnt like that. It through off the flow and made it seem at some points you didnt even know what you were saying. Your rhyming was also very meh. Some things didnt rhyme at all. You didnt have many internals so that didnt help. The storyline was nice but you fell off in spots. It seemed to ramble on and I got bored in some areas of it. The imagery was a strong point. You did make stuff clear so I could understand it and that saved your piece. Overall it was a very mediocre piece in my opinion. My favorite lines were this..

"So Blind To Me Until The Time Of Need...
Now It Is I With Eyes Wide Shut And Blind Prestige."

So anyways I've seen better from you. Please hit up the link in my sig. Thanks bro

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