its all good thanx fo the feed.........oh and the reason i put the *........................* its because its a continue of 1 bar if i left it right there with out the *....................* my structure would really be fuck cuz the syllable count is off so it won't line up ya kno yea im sure you would've done betta maybe we'll battle again in the future Black

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