Not feeling the beat, if you wanna diss someone pick a more fast, hyped up beat you know. It allows you to put more anger in your voice, was a hard beat to spit on too because it was so slow. That's why it sounded in some places like you were just talking. Like UNF said, let us hear you cant stand this dude, let us feel the anger and shit ya know. Emotion needs to be there, definitely in a diss! And it's ya second audio hehe but it's aight though, you just made it hard on yaself with the beat actually...but keep on working ya know...

(Btw, i'm the last person to criticize on you because I'm only starting myself but anyway)

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