i honestly can't vote...there are no appealing punches personals rhyme scheme vocabular multies wordplay etc.

this battle was by far one of the worst ive read in a while.....you both should up a alot on everything

big-0- try upping your structurre and making it more fluently like shazz's ok, when your trying to throw a punch make sure the line above it is a set up...and when you do throw a punch make sure it isnt a 4th grade punch...actually put some thought into it so it looks like you care.....i mean.....seriuosly..."next time dont show up" no thats not a punch...just elevate fo real...

shazz-i heard you were dope on rb, but so far you've batteled no body except for newb's dawg...and no offence but your battle skill seemed to have died...your first 3 lines dont rhyme....and your whole verse had atleast 5th grade punches...i mean..this shits boring like math class?.......nope sry...dont work...gotta be more creative and constructive with you verse.....your structure is iight...probally the only thing going for you..

no hate to either....just some elevation tips...1

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