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Old 10-16-05, 12:36 PM   #13
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Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
^aight first bar,good wordplay formed into punch

Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
^uhm not really feelin this bar actually

You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
^uhm again the hot flash thing, good wordplay into punch though but same concept basically

Solid battle, good wordplay but using the hot flash concept twice kinda threw me off you know.
Could've been more creative, vocab was coo, flow was aight...solid...

common

Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
^hehe, good opener, coo wordplay and all

Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
^hmmmmmm just like with him i don't like this one...

When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
^LMAO, damn you killed it with this one...hahaha...

First line was cool, second kinda threw me off but man that last line was nice hehe. Vocab
was cool, got flow down and just overall good battle.
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