1st off...beat is pretty coo

2nd...Implicit can not sing...don't ever put him on another track


3rd...I like the sound effect of the kid "read me a bed time story"

Your flow was pretty decent here...nothing major one way or the other...

Lyrics seem personal...so, nothing intricate lyrically is required...


chorus comes in again...**contemplates suicide**


ok...2nd verse, u entered on the wrong beat, IMO...got back on track

track jumped in a couple spots...cud have been my computer


not a bad track...not a great track = decent...would be better with a better singer and a flow that was more consistent throughout the track

6.8/10



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