Listenin...

Beat is coo...I can hear hiss and pops and shit in the beginning...voice is okay...Verse kicks in...I only have time to listen to the frist verse, but anyway...flow is decent, not choppy, just needs a little bit of work...quality is lacking, but yeah...lyrics are coo...but the biggest problem is you delivery and emotion. It sounds like your whispering into that shit. Don't whisper...yell haha.

Word, keep it up man.

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