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Old 10-16-05, 07:12 PM   #6
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transkriptz-
not feelin this, vocals r too soft n the disses r repetitive. how many times do u need to call him a girl?
n wut the fuck is "No ones really gonna give a fuck tll i fuck up this fuck"
n some of the rhymes (war/bra) i wudve given u in a text battle, but u need 2 make them rhyme when u rap them

unf- lol @ "Battle Vs Ma Boi Transkriptz On RV-" n "Transkripts You A Bitch,A Whack Hu Dont Fuck
Hes Afraid Of Pussy So All He Do Is Suck"
neways, u had more presence here, n ur lyrics were way better

rtf to one of the links in my sig